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About Youthful Gods, Book One: Pretty Pleasures

by J. Rocci
317 pages / 64600 words
ISBN: 978-1-61040-070-1
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Greg Barton has worked at the renaissance faire for years, but it’s Greg’s last season so he’s determined to live it up. Lucky for Greg, Boone, the hot traveling armorer, remembers Greg from previous years and returns his interest. The two reconnect and Greg finds himself tumbling into Boone’s bed, dangerously close to losing his heart.

Only, there’s something not quite right with Boone. From the way Greg kept dreaming about Boone in the off-season to Boone’s overprotective friends, Greg’s light-hearted romance quickly gets heavy. When Greg wakes up to an unexpected sight beside him, his entire world is up-ended. Magic is real and his new lover has more secrets than Greg ever imagined. But Greg has a few secrets of his own, and he has to decide if he wants to be a part of Boone’s world. If Greg has a touch of magic himself… Well, that world just got a whole lot more complicated and dangerous for both of them.

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Review

Angela Benedetti, author of A Hidden Magic, writes: I've been a fantasy fan for a very long time -- I read The Lion, The Witch and the Wardrobe about thirty-five years ago, and I've read a lot of fantasy since -- and at this point it's pretty rare that a writer manages to hand me something I haven't seen before, short of going way out into the far pastures where writers like China Mieville routinely hang out. I was looking forward to this book, but wasn't expecting anything particularly new or different. Luckily I got a surprise.

I'm not going to tell you what it is, because that'd be spoilery. I will say that I've never seen this type of magical being presented as the main character of a fantasy work before, and for that Rocci gets some serious props. There were a few other things I also wasn't expecting; she has a deft hand with laying solid foundations and then pulling off reveals that aren't telegraphed from a hundred pages back, but still feel right and fit smoothly into the story.

The romance is well done too, with a good balance between the characters. Greg has a his strengths and weaknesses, with mixed feelings about leaving the faire for the last time, but a desire to do the Normal Thing and get a regular job once he graduates with his degree, which is just a few weeks away. He also hasn't come out to his family, and doesn't have a great relationship with them even aside from that; this is a significant but not huge issue in the story, and feels very realistic, especially as we get more information about why Greg doesn't fit in.

Boone is strong and handsome and self-assured, which just makes it cuter when he's suddenly not quite so sure of himself around Greg, or when things don't go exactly as planned. Again, the balance worked well; I didn't get the impression that he was either too much of a Perfect Boyfriend, nor was he reduced to comedy or pathos. He and Greg both feel like real people, guys I'd enjoy knowing -- not perfect but not charicatures either. I can imagine Greg and Boone working faires up and down the east coast as I type this.

This is book one of a series and there are clearly some threads left hanging for the sequel, but the story of Greg and Boone's romance is complete in and of itself; this isn't just a larger novel chopped into pieces. The characters are engaging, the writing is smooth, and the worldbuilding -- the backstage-at-Rennfaire setting as well as the magical society hiding within our more mundane world -- is intriguing and fresh and makes me want more. Good stuff -- highly recommended.

Sample

Looking back, Greg told himself that he never could remember what drew him to the armor stall on opening day.

He told himself that he didn't really know Boone, the owner, not like he did some of the other traveling Rennies. It wasn't like they had any deep acquaintance, beyond a short conversation on volunteerism at the end of the previous Season. Boone probably didn't even remember their casual encounter.

So what if Greg had this lingering awareness that had haunted him during the past year? A harmless crush that made him compare the smile of every man he met to Boone's wide grin, that made him wish for broad hands, tanned and rough around the nail beds. He told himself that didn't really signify anything. He just happened to be attracted to Boone's type.

But then, Greg had always been a terrible liar, even to himself.

And there he was, joining the crowds around the thatched hut on opening day, heeled boots resounding on the worn boards of the shop's front porch. He wasn't the only one in costume, but he was the only one getting paid for it.

His supervisor had stopped by the darts booth to give Greg his half-hour break, and Greg had set out to see which vendors had returned so he could renew his acquaintances among the traveling Rennies. He should have gone in the other direction, toward the food court and Mel and the glassblower's shaded hut. He should have stopped by the Jacob's Ladder to talk to the new guy who had been eyeing him during their first morning meeting.

He should have kept walking and ignored the tugging itch that pulled his attention to the decorated shop front, luring him down the short, gravel side path.

Instead, Greg found himself staring up at the intricately carved sign for Pretty Pleasures. Wafts of leather and copper and burned wood twisted around him in the heavy summer breeze. Carved wooden faces looked down at him from the awnings, each joist adorned by an oak leaf-covered face. Some had yawning mouths, disgorging wooden vines that trailed above the arches of the shop front and around to the side fence backing the shops.

The dim interior beckoned as he stood in the fierce southern sun, and Greg slowly stepped up into the racks of leather goods, avoiding the chain mail and armor displays that were carefully shaded. Heavy leather jerkins hung in rows along the wall. Women's corsets were on tree racks in the middle of the store. Pouches, gauntlets, belts, and hats were displayed in every other available space, sometimes hanging in bunches from the roof gables like grapes or trailing down a support beam on heavy, twisted hooks.

The store was crowded, as was expected on opening day, but Greg was gritty with dust, pungent with drying sweat, and the Faire patrons gave him space. He took his time looking over the items on display near the counter -- leather hair thongs, chain mail hoods, sword scabbards -- so he was there when Boone returned from the back room.

Boone was... Greg couldn't find the words to describe what the sight of the other man did to his insides.

The shop owner had heavily tanned skin and crow's feet that crinkled around his eyes as he smiled at a customer and handed over a wrapped package. His blunt, thick fingers cradled the bundle as he made sure the woman could hold its heavy weight before he let go. He couldn't be older than thirty, but something in his manner bespoke more years than that.

Intricately stitched swirls of black and burgundy covered his leather jerkin, and his simple, black tunic was unlaced at the throat, highlighting the line of his neck. His brown hair curled out from under his burgundy leather cap, damp from sweat, and a strand clung to his temple. The loose strand made Greg want to reach out, to push it back from Boone's face.

The customer said something, and Boone guffawed. The man’s deep, rumbling laugh shouldn't have been attractive, but the sound skittered across Greg's skin, charging him with this pressure, this awareness that had awoken him nights on end, sweaty and panting. Greg's hands froze on the wooden counter inches from a set of arm bracers.

Finishing with the lady, Boone glanced over, the bright chocolate brown of his eyes luminous in the dim light, and smiled at Greg. It was simple and knowing, inviting Greg to laugh with him, to lean over the counter and touch his lips. The kind of smile old lovers might share, or new lovers might yearn to taste.

Greg couldn't look away. He'd seen that smile before, at the tavern on the last day of the previous Season, when he'd finally gathered his courage to approach Boone at the bar. He'd seen that smile at least once a week since, in dreams that left him gasping for breath, sheets sticky and cooling between his legs from the type of lust that was embarrassing at twenty-four years old.

It was a smile he could lose himself in and have no regrets.

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