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About Hourglass

by Jane Davitt
291 pages / 70000 words
ISBN: 978-1-61040-133-3
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When Ben Adler gives in and makes his young daughter's wish come true, making a movie out of a TV show he used to produce, he knows he's going to have big problems. One of the leads from the original is a big star now, but the other's vanished into obscurity, leading a life far from the glitz and glamour of Hollywood. Not to mention that Ben can still remember how the two actors' scorching off-screen romance went up in flames.

Undeterred, Ben goes forward with the project, recruiting Ash and Lee by dangling very attractive carrots before them. The cameras start to roll, but the main action takes place off set. It's never easy to work with an old flame, or
to handle the renewed feelings that are bound to come out. As two men who
could never get enough of each other deal with a rekindled attraction, they discover that when it comes to love, there's always time for a retake.

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Review

Lee Benoit, author of Servant of the Seasons, writes: I've never met a Jane Davitt story I didn't like, but I have to say Hourglass is the best ever. This is a story of love lost and love regained, and for my money Jane gets everything right.

The heroes are, well, tarnished -- damaged by lives and choices that make real-world sense and breed blockbuster consequences. Sexy matinee-idol Ash made the choice that drove the heroes apart ten years before Hourglass' action begins, and Davitt infuses him with just the right streak of ego and ambition that we can easily imagine him choosing his career over his lover. But Ash has grown in the decade between that fateful choice and his reunion with the man who got away. With very deft character development, Davitt introduces us to the broken Ash, shows us his shiny and hopeful past, and draws him forward to his future with a new awareness of who he is. His flaws and personality intact, the strides Ash makes are hard-won and heart-thumping. Davitt never goes for the foregone conclusion or the easy solution, and she knows just how to keep her readers on the edge of their seats while her characters sweat their way to their happy ending.

Lee (excellent name choice, IMO) could have been a victim -- of Ash's ambition or of the entertainment industry -- but instead he's a strong, multilayered character. After a scalding affair with Ash during the run of their TV show "Hourglass" Lee left acting behind, forged a life for himself, and came out of the closet. Reconnecting with his former lover as they prepare to shoot an "Hourglass" movie, he confronts his hurt and regret about the past in direct and honest ways. He's an easy man to like and respect, and Davitt has us rooting for him every step of the way. Lee's no doormat -- he doesn't make it easy for Ash or for himself, and that makes their ultimate reconciliation all the more satisfying.

The secondary characters are perfectly drawn and each pulls his or her own weight in the meaty, engrossing plot. Ben is a Hollywood producer in the old-fashioned, hard-boiled mode whose soft spots for his daughter and ultimately our heroes strike just the right gruffly affectionate note. Ben's daughter Samantha, the catalyst for the plot, is just the sort of eleven-year-old you'd want to spend time with. Worldly and precocious, with her dad wrapped around her little finger, she's never twee or irritating. Lee's agent, a personal trainer, and a few others glide seamlessly into and out of the story supporting the action and the development of Ash and Lee's romance without ever chomping on scenery or stealing scenes -- a temptation that must have been hard to resist as each is three-dimensional and engaging.

Davitt also does an admirable job building the world of a Hollywood film set. Every detail is organic to the plot and effortlessly convincing. The frenetic pace and high-stakes rhythm of filmmaking comes across beautifully and adds a sense of urgency to the mood of the novel.

And speaking of mood: Ash and Lee are an insanely hot couple. Their past and present encounters each contribute something essential to the story, so that every time they come together we learn something new about them or the challenges they face. And that's the most amazing thing of all in this extremely strong novel: Davitt tells an engrossing story by staying true to her characters in every respect, and the reader can't look away until the final, inevitable "Fade Out."
 

Sample

Ben ambled into the kitchen and fed the coffee maker water and Folgers, before pressing a single button. That done, he hacked off a piece of two-day-old cake, sticky with glaze and rich with cinnamon and ate it over the sink, staring out at his pool. February. Too cold to swim. Ben wasn't the hardy type and he didn't have a body that could transcend goose bumps and still look good. At forty-five, he was balding, had a pot-belly, and the hair on his chest was turning gray. The thermometer said it was 14C; he'd stay dressed, thanks.

The house was quiet, his phone set to voice mail, as it always was when he was asleep. He was too big a name to be woken up because someone else had a problem. If he listened, though, he could hear the TV's chatter floating up from the basement. When the coffee maker had produced enough to fill his favorite, over-sized mug, a plain, glossy red, thick and heavy, he headed down the basement stairs, sipping as he went.

Two steps from the foot of the stairs, Samantha wailed, "Noooooo," her voice desolate, despairing. Ben lurched forward, instinctively responding to her distress, spilled coffee over his bare feet, and cursed dispassionately as the liquid soaked into a pearl-gray carpet. Scotch-Guarded, his ass -- that was never coming off.

"Sweetheart? You okay?" he called, shaking his feet irritably, one by one. Of course she was okay, why wouldn't she be okay? She'd probably spent the last four hours watching gore and porn because he was a shitty father, but hey, every other kid in her class seemed to be in therapy, so why not her?

"He was pushed off the roof," Samantha said, her face tragic and she hit pause on the remote, freezing the action on a screen big enough to need a zip code. "He died. Oh, God, Daddy, tell me it works out because I can't watch it if he stays dead."

Kids nowadays; they thought death could be erased and yeah, if the star was big enough and the fans loud enough, sometimes, just sometimes, it could happen. Dallas had done it on an epic scale with Bobby in the freaking shower for a year. It took balls of steel to write off an entire season as a dream. Ben was a believer in go big or go home. If he failed, and in this industry you could wake up a has-been after going to bed a sure-thing, he'd do it in style.

"What're you watching?" Ben squinted at the screen, the action frozen on a frame with someone's back taking up most of the shot. Automatically, he admired the angle and the lighting, recognizing his own work, and then something about the tilt of the head…

Next to the TV was a tall stack of videotapes, the boxes looking big and clunky compared to a slim DVD case. They were official studio ones, not merchandise, so the covers were blank, but Ben's eyesight was still 20-20 and he could read the neat printing on the spines. Anger, disappointment, regret; the echoes of the emotions he'd felt ten years before when the show ended rang in his ears, making his heart pound with a sickeningly fast beat.

Hourglass. His baby girl was watching Hourglass.

Well, fuck.

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